Friday, July 23, 2010

once upon a time.

I've tried my hand a writing a few stories, but end up giving up because I just don't feel they are any good.
A few years back, after several unsuccessful writing attempts, I read a book entitled "Crafty Screenwriting" that really rocked my world in exactly HOW you go about writing a story.
Right off the bat the book says, "Don't start by writing a story." I was puzzled, so I continued on.
It asks the question of what the point of writing is if you don't even know if you have a good story. What the book says to do is to instead just start talking to people about your story, any that will listen. The more you tell it, the more details you begin to add to it.
You know you've got something when people start asking questions about plot/characters/setting. THEN you know you've got a story. Once people seem to be invested in this fantasy you're laying on them.
So, I thought I'd give it a shot. Why not? Below are the three main stories I've tried to write or have thought about writing. I actually am a little nervous because I've always been super protective of this stuff, not wanting people to think I'm a weirdo for coming up with these. It really is just a few stories that I thought might be intriguing or that I would be interested in reading if someone explained the idea to me. Anyway, here they are!!!

1) Waiting on an Angel - A drama about finding that "special someone." Seriously. No, I'm serious. Why are you laughing? This was script I started working on when I was going through an extremely difficult time in my life after breaking up with my girlfriend of nearly two years. Writing this really helped me look for the positive in every relationship and no matter how good or how bad, you can learn from it.
Before I started writing, I actually prepared a 32 song soundtrack, organizing the songs in a way that they told the story chronologically.
The story begins with a couple breaking up in the winter months. In the spring, he begins another relationship, then summer another, fall another, and then the film concludes the following winter. The story is to show the man's growth relationally as each season comes and goes. It seems very subtle as the story is progressing, but as we see him at the end in the winter, putting him in the same environment as which we first saw him, we can obviously identify how much he has changed.
What girl does he end up with? Does he end up with anyone??? DRAAA-MAAAAA!!!

2) Good Faith Manor - A classic horror setting with mind-blowing twist! Five friends take a trip into an abandon mansion that used to be an insane asylum. They are scoping out the place before things start to....come on, you know the story.
The asylum was burned down many years ago and was rebuilt on the same foundation and converted into a retirement home, which was later abandon.
This is actually based on a true story of an old retirement home just north of Boone. Went in it once several years ago (before it was torn down) and that sucker was flat out creepy.
This story unfortunately sounds really cliche, but I really can't give away the twist because it kind of defeats the purpose of even writing the thing. I have told a couple people about it and they all had extremely positive responses to the twist (one friend told me he got chills when I revealed it to him. WHAAAAAAT?).
The ending is what makes this different from your classic ghost story. I feel the ending is actually very powerful as it deals strongly with matters of faith, forgiveness and following Christ.

3) The Reigning Down - Here is your epic thriller. Think DaVinci Code but not ridiculous. It deals with a young historian that stumbles across something very puzzling in his research. There is a period of 700 years that are completely unaccounted for. He can't find any information of any people or any events that took place during this time. The last bit of information he uncovers is an unnatural solar eclipse followed the same day by a harvest moon and then.....nothing, for 700 years.
As he begins to dig deeper, he realizes there are those out there trying to protect a secret!
And a MASSIVE twist at the end, which, of course, I can't say a thing about.

So, based on these synopsis...es..is, which of these stories sound worthy of being written? Which one do you have the most questions about? Which are terrible? Awful altogether and back to the drawing board?
I would love to hear any and all feedback because I really would like to write a story someday. Not necessarily any of these, but I feel like "writing a book/screenplay" is definetely on my bucket list.

4 comments:

  1. I feel as if I deserve some of the credit for this because I told you on Thursday that you should write a movie... never-mind that all the ideas that you had were well before Thursday... there are always inconsistencies.

    Number 3 sounds interesting. I assume there are 700 years missing in a certain culture's history and not the entire world's. I think it is annoying in movies to make up history that is obviously false. It sounds intriguing. I'm curious how he actually finds the information if there is none. But I trust you have a good way around it.

    I'd definitely see any movie that you wrote at the dollar theatre.

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  2. #3! You had me at 'epic' (a favorite word of mine that I probably over use). I too am interested in how he does find information on the 700 years. Also I wonder whether you are going to tie it into existing places and events, explained or unexplained... or if you are going to create all the surroundings anew. I like the former if it's done well and seems fairly believable.

    I'm excited to hear all this writing talk! A blog is not a book, but I like your blog so I'm just going to assume I'd like whatever book you wrote too.

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  3. Go with #3 -- fascinating!

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  4. As the classic "girl," I must say 'Waiting on an Angel" sounds like a really good movie. I like that it shows the growth of a man through relationships, since most movies now only show the woman growing. Just make sure he stays a man and isn't all lame and metro-y. Yes, that's right. metro-y.

    #2 sounds similar (emphasis on similar) to Shutter Island. I don't like scary movies, but I'm sure yours would be good...and I like that it would point you toward Christ, light & hope (I'm just assuming those last two points because they're associated with Christ). Knowing that, I'd probably put myself through the suspense. If I know that I won't come away guaranteed to have nightmares and think Candyman lives in my basement, I could do it.
    (Yes, that really happened to me. Fear is illogical, okay?)

    #3 I like, as well. I'd like it if you put a disclaimer on it that it's NOT REAL. People don't bother to check anything out anymore, and believe most of what they see on a movie screen. Please just don't make the world any dumber. :)

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